Using the rule of thirds might have created more movement and interest in this photo. I like the surreal feel of this image, although the sky is the most interesting aspect and it doesn't really make me thirsty.
I love the sun flare! what are those other little white dots on picture? (seen infront of the arm? it looks like little drips of water? I think the pic would look much cleaner and score much higher without them, great idea though!