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10/08/2009 04:16:13 AM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
My thoughts on the image: I do indeed like the ass. That's my first thought. I do also like the mono-toning that you created with your post-processing. The tones are nice, but a little flat to my eye. The pose is classic, and I like the flow that you created with your positioning.
My ideas for improvement: I don't care for the crop that you chose for the image. The narrow frame makes my eye feel trapped and unable to explore. The focus also seems soft to me. I am guessing that this was a self-portrait which would perhaps explain the softness.
Where I would have/did score this entry: I didn't vote on any entries from the nude challenge this time around as I have spent far too much time at work lately. Had I cast a vote in this entry, it would have probably fallen into the 4-5 range. I do love the idea of your image here, and I think you have a really, really strong start. I jut think that the execution and main focal area should have been in a different area. Nice work, and again, I do like the butt you presented here.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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10/07/2009 10:31:21 PM |
good gosh woman! congratulations on having a good model :)
i think you should be proud of your 'own' work |
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10/03/2009 09:36:42 PM |
hi snaffles:) nice ass lol
hey!!! i got this awesome corset while in vegas, i might have to take a photo and send it to you lol!!! |
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10/02/2009 11:44:44 AM |
| During voting I truly enjoyed this one. In fact, I gave you a 9. I think this was under rated. Good shot |
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10/02/2009 08:42:01 AM |
| Hey Susan if my butt looked that good I'd take pictures of it all the time. |
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10/01/2009 09:26:22 PM |
One of my favorites of this comp. I think you did an outstanding job on the comp crop and lighting of this image. Keep up the awesome work.
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10/01/2009 07:55:46 PM |
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09/30/2009 05:18:21 PM |
| Like the multitude of whites. |
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09/30/2009 12:31:26 PM |
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09/29/2009 12:20:39 AM |
| i bet i know whos ass that is lol |
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09/28/2009 09:20:15 PM |
| The crop is not very appealing. I think that if it was a standard portrait crop this would score much higher from me. |
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09/28/2009 05:24:07 PM |
| You have a couple of spots on the clothing that are blown out. The lighting could be a litle softer and that may have helped. I would als say to show some lower back and add a little more interest to the photo. Not a bad shot, jsut could use a little help. |
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09/27/2009 03:55:58 PM |
| nice idea, Whites on her dress seem a little blown to me. |
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09/27/2009 01:11:52 AM |
| Lovely composition - very well lit - a tender photo. |
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09/25/2009 03:51:46 PM |
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09/25/2009 03:43:39 PM |
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09/25/2009 12:15:10 AM |
| A little too confined, which leaves me feeling a bit claustrophobic. |
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