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snaffles

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Challenge: Nude V (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: 2009 Challenges
Camera: Nikon D40
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX NIKKOR 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6G ED VR II
Location: La downstairs Studio dans le Chateau Snaffles
Date: Sep 20, 2009
Aperture: f7.1
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/6
Galleries: Humorous, Nude
Date Uploaded: Sep 24, 2009

Guess who! Couldn't help myself :-) Used a borrowed wedding dress from Ryan's sister's first wedding. Stood on the trunk in the downstairs studio, lit from the right side only to create more dramatic shadows.

No idea why I shot so slowly, but I did!

pp: RAW-TIFF conversion, crop, desat, curves, clone, healing tool, brightness/contrast, resize, usm, sharpen edges, save for web

Statistics
Place: 33 out of 53
Avg (all users): 5.4075
Avg (commenters): 6.4167
Avg (participants): 5.2632
Avg (non-participants): 5.4207
Views since voting: 9006
Views during voting: 1325
Votes: 454
Comments: 17
Favorites: 1 (view)


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10/08/2009 04:16:13 AM
Hey there from the Critique Club

My thoughts on the image: I do indeed like the ass. That's my first thought. I do also like the mono-toning that you created with your post-processing. The tones are nice, but a little flat to my eye. The pose is classic, and I like the flow that you created with your positioning.

My ideas for improvement: I don't care for the crop that you chose for the image. The narrow frame makes my eye feel trapped and unable to explore. The focus also seems soft to me. I am guessing that this was a self-portrait which would perhaps explain the softness.

Where I would have/did score this entry: I didn't vote on any entries from the nude challenge this time around as I have spent far too much time at work lately. Had I cast a vote in this entry, it would have probably fallen into the 4-5 range. I do love the idea of your image here, and I think you have a really, really strong start. I jut think that the execution and main focal area should have been in a different area. Nice work, and again, I do like the butt you presented here.

Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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10/07/2009 10:31:21 PM
good gosh woman! congratulations on having a good model :)

i think you should be proud of your 'own' work
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10/03/2009 09:36:42 PM
hi snaffles:) nice ass lol

hey!!! i got this awesome corset while in vegas, i might have to take a photo and send it to you lol!!!
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10/02/2009 11:44:44 AM
During voting I truly enjoyed this one. In fact, I gave you a 9. I think this was under rated. Good shot
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10/02/2009 08:42:01 AM
Hey Susan if my butt looked that good I'd take pictures of it all the time.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/01/2009 09:26:22 PM
One of my favorites of this comp. I think you did an outstanding job on the comp crop and lighting of this image. Keep up the awesome work.
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10/01/2009 07:55:46 PM
Wonderful bridal shot.
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09/30/2009 05:18:21 PM
Like the multitude of whites.
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09/30/2009 12:31:26 PM
interesting
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09/29/2009 12:20:39 AM
i bet i know whos ass that is lol
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09/28/2009 09:20:15 PM
The crop is not very appealing. I think that if it was a standard portrait crop this would score much higher from me.
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09/28/2009 05:24:07 PM
You have a couple of spots on the clothing that are blown out. The lighting could be a litle softer and that may have helped. I would als say to show some lower back and add a little more interest to the photo. Not a bad shot, jsut could use a little help.
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09/27/2009 03:55:58 PM
nice idea, Whites on her dress seem a little blown to me.
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09/27/2009 01:11:52 AM
Lovely composition - very well lit - a tender photo.
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09/25/2009 03:51:46 PM
I love this pic.
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09/25/2009 03:43:39 PM
Very tall composition.
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09/25/2009 12:15:10 AM
A little too confined, which leaves me feeling a bit claustrophobic.
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