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Challenge: Free Study 2009-09 (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: 2009 Challenges
Camera: Canon EOS-40D
Location: James River, VA
Date: Sep 11, 2009
Aperture: 7.1
ISO: 160
Shutter: 1/80
Galleries: Sky, Water
Date Uploaded: Sep 12, 2009

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Statistics
Place: 173 out of 400
Avg (all users): 5.8042
Avg (commenters): 7.6667
Avg (participants): 5.7850
Avg (non-participants): 5.8611
Views since voting: 619
Views during voting: 252
Votes: 143
Comments: 6
Favorites: 2 (view)


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10/08/2009 07:31:46 PM
Commenting as part of my Team Suck duties...

Beautiful sunset photo Wendy. I particularly love the clouds and the colours. If I was to pick on this at all, it would be the composition (I guess), in that the shoreline, the horizon and the boat/surfski/kayak/surfboard/? are all at different angles, and the boat/surfski/kayak/surfboard/? breaks the horizon line... I think the later of the two is the bigger issue really, because I think that the image could have worked with a variety of angles if only the horizon wasn't intersected as it is. Also, the plant in the water on the right is a minor distraction, though, I can see that losing that would have lost you the rule of thirds composition (which I like)... tough call. One last thing... horizon is a bit to close to centred... perhaps taking the photo from closer to the ground might have got the horizon lower and separated it from the boat/surfski/kayak/surfboard/?... but I wasn't there and I don't know what you could and couldn't have done here. :)

I hope this is useful feedback and doesn't come across too critical. I really do like this image, but think there was so much potential in it, but for a few minor things.
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10/08/2009 12:30:08 AM
Did well with this. 5.8 in a freestudy is darn good in my book. I skipped the vote on it of course.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/04/2009 03:27:48 AM
beautiful image
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10/03/2009 07:12:10 PM
(No vote, just a comment)

Nice colors and patterns
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10/03/2009 08:55:26 AM
Very very good. I love the colours. Great stuff.
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10/01/2009 08:52:12 AM
Nice use of silhouette. I might've cloned out that little "blob" on the right side below the horizon.
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