Cute child. Square crop might bring more attention to the face and help remove the distracting plastic arc in left lower corner. Color balance adjustment reducing yellow-orange cast could help.
How adorable! Those eyes melt me LOL. I think that perhaps, had the color saturation been lowered just a bit, it might have had a less harsh look but, a really cute shot!
what a cutie!!! great job with the DOF ... my only suggestion is to crop out the lower left corner with that round thing and finger, my eye is drawn to it and it takes focus away from her eyes ...