Hi from the Critique Club,
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This is a lovely family portrait shot. There are a couple of things here, the shirts are a little blown out and the faces are dark. Your sharpness is spot on here, your DOF is great and the colours are really good.
Next time , maybe use a darker shirt and a reflector to bring out the faces a little more.
this is a lovely family shot that I am sure is treasured |