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One Blue Window and an Airplane
One Blue Window and an Airplane
bobdaveant


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Deep DOF (Advanced Editing II)
Camera: HP PhotoSmart 935
Location: Cleveland, Ohio
Date: Jun 2, 2004
Galleries: Cityscape, Architecture
Date Uploaded: Jun 5, 2004

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Statistics
Place: 39 out of 158
Avg (all users): 5.8842
Avg (commenters): 6.5385
Avg (participants): 5.6915
Avg (non-participants): 6.0729
Views since voting: 1072
Votes: 190
Comments: 16
Favorites: 0


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11/07/2005 10:47:37 PM
wow!! why didnt this scoer any higher.
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07/23/2005 11:35:21 PM
There are actually two blue windows :) Too much building and not enough sky Bob. If the airplane was part of the composition then I would have probably given it a little more breathing room. Great DOF!

Edit: I do like the symmetry of the image. it's a dull building. Ho-hum in my books but the vanishing points and leading lines towards the plane is great.

Message edited by author 2005-07-23 23:36:29.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/13/2004 06:24:22 AM
You captured this picture at the perfect moment. Excellent lighting, almost ominous. I get the feeling you were trying to elicit the memories of 9/11. You have done it.
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06/12/2004 11:03:00 AM
The few assymetrical elements add interest to a lackluster image. But there is still not a good center of focus to serve as an anchor for the viewer as he explores the photo.
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06/11/2004 05:32:52 PM
Sweet shot but way too grainy. Could have used a few runs through NeatImage. I think the graininess could have worked if the shot had been duotone or B&W. Also, you could have cloned out those two pale windows.
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06/11/2004 02:07:07 AM
Ha ha! I see TWO blue windows :)
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06/10/2004 11:58:07 PM
certainly meets the challenge
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06/10/2004 02:47:37 AM
I love the composition and subject here. The contrast in shapes and colors is nice. One thing I found distracting though is the appearance of grainyness and artifacts in the sky.
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06/09/2004 07:09:32 AM
Not two? Like the idea of the shot, not completely happy with the execution - I think I would have tried to frame the plane further from the edge of image, to start with - it's really too close to the edge for happiness for me. I like the processing, though I guess many won't, although the very hard halo's from sharpening I could live without. 6
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06/08/2004 06:21:19 PM
Remember 911.
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06/08/2004 06:25:30 AM
High ranking picture for me. After the challenges is over. I would try to put that window the same color as the rest. That picture is great.
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06/07/2004 09:42:23 PM
spooky
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06/07/2004 08:44:23 PM
This would have been great for planes trains and automobiles. Great catch!
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06/07/2004 04:21:36 AM
You know, I just can't look at a picture like this in the same way any more...
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06/07/2004 02:56:20 AM
A bit over-sharpened, but a great composition, a 7.
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06/07/2004 12:19:40 AM
high noise in the sky... maybe due to too much oversharpening. The halo around the plane suggest that there was way to much sharpening. Try NeatImage before processing your picture next time.
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