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08/31/2009 02:07:27 PM			 | 
		
		Thanks all for the comments! FWIW, this is the image I was trying to emulate -- I figured with all the smoke/dust/whatever the original was a little blurry too.
 
  
 Here is the ashtray I used -- I took the image pretty much edge-on in SuperMacro mode (lens virtually in contact with the subject), holding it up so the bulb from an overhead light fixture was shining through the glass:  
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08/31/2009 10:59:31 AM			 | 
		
		| hey congrats on the brown, it does match the photo :~) |  
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08/31/2009 05:11:23 AM			 | 
		
		I thought this was yours, instantly reminded me of  . Congrats on the brown! |  
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08/31/2009 12:58:00 AM			 | 
		
		| Man, I hate finding I left a hard critique on one of yours. (At least I explained my low vote, right?) Well, congrats on the notoriety of achieving the brown, I suppose! |  
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08/31/2009 12:32:53 AM			 | 
		
		| Congrats, Paul, you did it again! |  
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08/28/2009 12:23:54 PM			 | 
		
		| Unfortunately I see nothing on which to focus my attention. |  
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08/27/2009 06:41:42 PM			 | 
		
		| not sure what this is but your focus is to soft IMO...something needed to be in sharp focus... |  
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08/27/2009 01:27:32 PM			 | 
		
		| Very blurry and grainy. Sometimes that works nicely for an abstract, but I'm afraid it's not coming off well with me on this one. |  
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08/25/2009 12:23:19 PM			 | 
		
		| The abstract is good, so as the color. I just think that the harsh reflection at the middle, the focus, and the bottom/background of the shot aren't good. With more tweaking this shot would be nice! Good luck to you, sorry if i was rude! |  
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08/24/2009 02:48:40 AM			 | 
		
		| This image meets the challenge but other than that lacks of everything: focus, impact, correct exposure and white balance, visual appeal. A brown ribbon is still a ribbon, though. This shot absolutely deserves it. |  
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