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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Rule of Thirds IV (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-400D Rebel XTi
Lens: Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 II
Location: Home
Date: Aug 21, 2009
Aperture: f5.6
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/200s
Galleries: Studio
Date Uploaded: Aug 22, 2009

Trying to go for a pattern shot here. I'm not fond of the coloured circles as they were painted pretty poorly but I can't fix them. I also think I could have pushed some of the pieces to fill those wider gaps.

I don't think this will do well, but I took time to take it so I'm entering it.

Statistics
Place: 58 out of 194
Avg (all users): 5.6988
Avg (commenters): 7.3333
Avg (participants): 5.5735
Avg (non-participants): 5.7857
Views since voting: 564
Views during voting: 278
Votes: 166
Comments: 4
Favorites: 0


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AuthorThread
09/07/2009 01:10:46 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club...

This challenge is one that was rather easy to meet, so that aspect doesn't play a significant role in the results. A score of 5.69 is a little better than the 5.37 average of this challenge.

From my personal perspective, I love images that put shape and texture into the forefront of the composition. Your image does that rather well obviously due to the choice of subject. I also tend to like high contrast images, but this one seems to be just a little over the top in that aspect for me. On the other hand, what this image is lacking for me is some sort of theme that provides a high level of interest for me as the viewer. There is a good story of off balance and symmetry to go along with the shapes and texture, but it's just missing something else and I can't really put my finger on it. Generally when that becomes a problem, its a simple choice of subject that comes into play.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/28/2009 01:59:28 PM
Very nice! I like the idea and the composition is excellent. Nice job not blowing out the white while making the blues pop!
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08/27/2009 10:37:37 PM
Nice patterns,Karen.
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08/26/2009 12:55:06 AM
cool idea, i would have put the double 3's face up though :P
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