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Tim - Winter Burn Off
Tim - Winter Burn Off
GregoryB


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Challenge: Portraits Without Children (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-1D Mark III
Lens: Canon EF 100-400mm f/4.5-5.6L IS
Location: Home
Date: Jul 17, 2009
Aperture: f/6.3
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/300s
Galleries: Family, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Jul 18, 2009

Because we live on acreage and in a category 1 fire zone, Council and the Rural Fire Service allow us to do a hazard reduction burn on the property during the winter months.
This is my 20 year old son Tim just after we lit the pile.

Statistics
Place: 32 out of 159
Avg (all users): 6.0633
Avg (commenters): 6.6667
Avg (participants): 5.9153
Avg (non-participants): 6.1515
Views since voting: 1138
Views during voting: 333
Votes: 158
Comments: 5
Favorites: 0


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07/28/2009 09:20:20 PM
Critique Club Review:

Color Saturation and Hue: Colors and Hues are realistic, nothing is over saturated. Skin tones are excellent!

Brightness and contrast: Brightness is well done, as is contrast. The black of the hat holds detail well for the most part. Near the back it gets hard to see the detail. As others have noted, the shadow does distract a bit. Where this is advanced editing, this would have been a good time to equalize a bit, to reduce the effect of the shadow, allowing a more even lighting effect.

Focus and depth of field: Focus is razor sharp. Very nicely done. Depth of field is used well to separate the subject from the background. Though the background may be a tiny bit too soft. The flames make a very nice color pattern, but I wonder if the voters, who move through images pretty quickly, never noticed the nice big fire back there. A little more background detail might have sold the fire a little better.

Subjective: Very interesting image. I had to look a bit to see the fire, but other than that and the previously mentioned shadow, this image is one that holds the viewer's gaze. Your son makes a very good model. The pose, his self assured gaze, and the clothing all work together. Very nicely done.

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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/24/2009 08:48:46 PM
You did a good job with the exposure. Nice color BG and an overall pleasing portrait.
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07/20/2009 11:28:19 PM
The shadow cuts his face in half, I had the same problem while photographing my son in his cowboy hat for this challenge. The eyes are striking, especially against the blue in his shirt.
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07/20/2009 06:06:30 PM
great intensity.
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07/20/2009 03:31:02 AM
this looks fantastic in the challenge .. i'm not voting right now but wanted to know of you can see this comment .. let me know . !!..:)
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