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07/24/2009 06:59:34 AM |
Critique Club Critique
First Impressions
Interesting - I like the focus on her. Her pink jacket brings her into play more. I like the centered composition and framing too.
Photograph Information, Technicals & Composition Review
1.8 explains your nice shallow focus. Not bad sharpness for 1/50. As mentioned, I like your choice of composition and think it suits this well.
It seems a candid, but the expression is not so interesting to me. She is aware, but seemingly only just - this translates to a slightly intrusive feel, for me as a viewer. This could be your intent within the image.
Comments, Score & Placement Review
Top 10 is definitely a good place to finish. A lot of praise in your comments and a few fans thrown in too. 6.06 and top ten - very cruisey.
Summary
An interesting image that might not have worked in b&w, nice close up style of Street Photography that met the Challenge. |
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07/22/2009 05:56:07 PM |
| I love the business and it really works in color - excellent choices made here. Congrats on the top ten finish!! |
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07/22/2009 12:03:06 PM |
| Yeah this should have scored higher, it was in my top 3. Nice shot nonetheless. |
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07/22/2009 02:39:43 AM |
| should have place higher IMO |
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07/22/2009 01:15:54 AM |
| One of my highest scoring images. Surprised it didn't score higher. |
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07/21/2009 04:04:56 PM |
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07/20/2009 09:31:31 PM |
| Good use of DOF to show there really is a person inside all that clamor. |
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07/18/2009 10:16:50 AM |
| well done, hope this ranks high. 9 |
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07/16/2009 04:42:28 PM |
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07/16/2009 06:14:54 AM |
| To me, this is the essence of street photography. Somehow you managed to capture it in color. Bravo. 9 |
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07/16/2009 05:24:44 AM |
Bump to a 8.
could be better technically, but nice scene in general |
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07/15/2009 10:03:45 PM |
Excellent shot.
Original aswell. |
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07/15/2009 01:08:51 AM |
| Yes i've always wanted to take a picture like this! You've found a good subject. The sharp focus with narrow DoF and light really make this one, gl 8 from me |
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07/15/2009 12:34:59 AM |
| great photo for this challenge. 9 |
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