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08/06/2009 06:39:23 PM |
Greetings from Andi via the Critique Club
First Impression: An ok shot of a seagull, the thing that grabs me most is the weathered table.
Composition: I think a slightly wider view with the seagull further to the left and showing a little more of the sea would have worked better
Subject: DPC prefer extremes with challenges like this and you are only slightly above the main subject so that would have hurt you in the voting. If voters had spent a little more time they would have taken in the background and the fact you were way above that.
Technical: The backgound has a pleasing blur and the seagull is well seperated from it. Even on my slightly dark monitor the seagull is a little overexposed, the focus/exposure is best on the table.
Final thoughts: An ok shot of a seagull at the beach, it has no WOW factor but worth more than a 4.8 ommho. |
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07/09/2009 10:00:35 PM |
| Challenge Relevance:6 Impact/Emotion/Mood:6 Technicals:7 Processing:7 Creativity:5.5 |
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07/09/2009 07:51:00 PM |
| You got a good set-up there and a willing subject too. Nice job. |
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07/08/2009 01:20:30 AM |
"Photograph any subject from a vantage point above it."
I feel like I am basically at the same level as the subject... *sigh* DNMC, in my opinion... I'm sorry. |
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