This photo stoped my voting last night because I didn't have a clue what to wright. I didn't like it at first, found it a bit "weak and boring", but having it in the back of my mind for a day kinda helped. Your composition is OK, and this is a very good black and white conversion. Thumbs up for that =) But still, pay attention to where your focus is at. It looks like the flower in the middle is in focus, and maybe that was intended, but in this case it is the flower in the bottom left corner that is "the center of attention", and that flower is slightly out of focus. And that is giving the entire photo the out of focus feel, which I don't find suitable for this. This was a very very long comment, and I hope you got something out of it =) |