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Challenge: Promote Your Zoo (Advanced Editing VII*)
Collection: 2009 Challenges
Camera: Nikon D40
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX NIKKOR 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6G ED VR II
Location: Papanack Park Zoo
Date: Jun 5, 2009
Aperture: f6.3
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/500
Galleries: Emotive, Animals
Date Uploaded: Jun 7, 2009

An Arctic wolf mom and cub. Shortly after I got this shot, another four or so cubs appeared and she began nursing them standing up, but the shot got too cluttered with cuteness. So I stuck with the one cub getting their face washed :-) Dauning shot to get as I had to shoot through chain-link fence, just barely visible as haze, but couldn't think of a way to get rid of it without excessive cloning. *cross fingers that the cuteness factor will overrride the chainlink!*

pp: RAW conversion, crop, curves, contrast, saturation, add text layer, flatten image, resize, usm2x, sharpen edges 1x, save for web

Statistics
Place: 77 out of 87
Avg (all users): 5.0962
Avg (commenters): 6.3333
Avg (participants): 4.7179
Avg (non-participants): 5.2222
Views since voting: 761
Views during voting: 344
Votes: 156
Comments: 6
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06/15/2009 02:53:48 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club

Susan, I did a little test this morning to see if yours was the first one in the queue again, and sure enough, 3 mins after rollover I selected a new image to critique and I got yours! You must always be the first one to check the box :)

Sorry this didn't score a bit higher than it did. Composition is good, colours are good, lighting is good. I think you are hurting a bit due to the chainlink/limitations of your lens (I have the same one and I know it's not so great at the long end). The wolves are just not quite sharp enough (I know I like blur, but that's not quite the same as out of focus). Also, I think honestly, the text is hurting you a bit here. I can understand you using white, as it matches quite well the fur of the wolf, but the text at the bottom sort of blends into the leg. As this was for an advert, I also think the font used is not really the best one you could have used.

Sorry it didn't do a bit better.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/13/2009 11:28:20 AM
An awesome capture but to me, it looks like your stretching the limits of your lens.
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06/12/2009 04:44:15 AM
Nicely captured and good promotional poster.
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06/11/2009 02:01:16 PM
Nice catch of the interaction, and babies with their moms always make good advertising for a zoo. Good use of the diagonal in the composition.
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06/08/2009 12:49:37 PM
What a SWEET capture.
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06/08/2009 09:15:52 AM
Almost lost the second line in the foreleg there, awesome timing!
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