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06/15/2009 05:22:29 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Overall your image did quite well in this challenge. A 6.3+ score is quite good, and there were very few votes below 5. While it did do quite well, there are some suggestions that I would make that I think would improve the image. I should mention though, that these are only my personal preferences, and I dont know if taking my suggestions would improve on your score, as you did do quite well.
First, I would have chosen a horizontal crop, to ensure that I did not cut off the end of the trunk. Also, I find the tight crop confining in this shot. Also, as mentioned in some of the comments, some find it oversharpened. Toning down the sharpness a tad would have kept your textures, but also kept the image feeling natural.
Overall, a very good photo, and I like that the tagline in the ad relates to the image.
VitaminB |
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06/15/2009 02:24:23 AM |
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06/14/2009 05:36:35 AM |
| textures on the elephant are amazing |
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06/12/2009 07:13:31 PM |
| An excellent composition! |
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06/12/2009 05:00:32 AM |
| Nicely captured and makes a good promotional poster. |
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06/11/2009 10:42:17 PM |
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06/11/2009 12:08:12 PM |
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06/11/2009 10:22:31 AM |
| Excellent idea and I love the shades of gray! Nice use of text to match the sentiment of the photo and I like the font. My only criticism would be it appears every so slightly oversharpened. Definitely could see this as a brochure cover, though. |
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06/09/2009 10:01:43 AM |
| You can see every wrinkle. He is wonderful |
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06/09/2009 12:28:41 AM |
| The light and composition are great. Is his skin spotty or is it just oversharpened? Excellent otherwise. |
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06/08/2009 01:34:11 PM |
| Funny caption for a great capture! Love the detail & clarity - plus the natural tones. Very well done. |
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06/08/2009 12:53:27 PM |
| Love this poster. The border is beautiful, the message is fun, and the photo is very appealing. 10 from me. |
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06/08/2009 12:42:34 PM |
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06/08/2009 12:07:11 AM |
| the fonts don't work well together, but this is not a font challenge, so on to the photo...OK, but a little oversharpened |
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