Good effort Chris! I'm new to DP and some of my pictures have done ok and some not so good. But with every picture we learn a little bit more about photography, and what works and what we need to work on and thats what it's all about!
I look forward to seeing more of your photos in the future!
An image that is so gob smackingly awful it defies accurate description - there must be a reason for submitting it. One can only assume that it's meant to achieve the lowest score possible which can be obliged.