| Author | Thread |
|
|
07/24/2014 01:36:30 PM |
| Life is nothing but shades of gray. |
|
 Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/25/2009 12:51:45 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Initial impression: A very simple, cleanly executed shot of a 'family' of pencils that cover most of the bases on the grayscale. I would've given this an 8.
Technical: The composition is great, all the varying heights of the pencils adds flow and interest to the shot; the lighting is wonderful and offsets the pencils to advantage. No pencil is lost against the b/g. I would have liked to see more dof. That f1.8 is a great lens; I love it because it makes me to work so hard to get a good shot.
Artistic: Love the idea of a family portrait, the clean lines and flow here, such a simple idea and very well done. Obviously the dpc crowd agrees. Can't argue with a top-20 finish!
FWIW: Apart from the dof, I wouldn't change a thing. A perfect example of a shot showing the KISS principle at work. Well done!
Feel free to PM me with any questions.
Susan |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
|
04/19/2009 07:50:56 PM |
| since this a so-called family portrait, i might have prefered that all of the pencils be in focus. nice range of grays |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/17/2009 12:59:42 PM |
| very basic, but beautifully lit and arranged. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/17/2009 11:41:15 AM |
| I love the simplicity and the lighting. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/16/2009 08:45:28 AM |
| Look how worn out that poor mother is!!! |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/15/2009 09:55:11 AM |
| Love the lighting on the picture. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/14/2009 11:10:02 AM |
| Well done shot. Sharp, good background matching it all. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/14/2009 10:34:32 AM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/14/2009 08:36:49 AM |
| Nicely done! maybe a little more dof. JMO! |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/13/2009 10:03:55 PM |
| I like the idea of the family portrait, and I think the composition works quite well, but in the same vein of the idea, I think that it would work better if "everyone" was in focus. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/13/2009 05:33:54 PM |
| The image meets the subject. A couple of minor detail problems as the image appears to be less than sharp. The DOF could have been used more effectively. A good solid entry into the challenge. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/13/2009 02:20:39 AM |
| HAHAHA I LOVE IT! Very creative and highly well done. I love that you did the different heights like a real "family portrait" would be. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/13/2009 01:16:30 AM |
| although this is cute it still is a great shot, nice lighting |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/13/2009 12:46:23 AM |
| great title and a nicely lit image |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/13/2009 12:39:51 AM |
| simple clean and well lit. I like it! |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/13/2009 12:26:06 AM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Prints! -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2024 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 04/25/2024 11:54:32 AM EDT.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
