This is a cool looking lighter. It has the potential to be a great subject. I don't care for this placement in the frame and the background has quite a bit of texture which is distracting. The dark traingle at the lower edge of the frame is very distracting.
are you counting your flash and your lighter as your multiple light sources? if so, then I think they should both be on. If not, I don't see more then on source.
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