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VitaminB
APW - Archive Photo a Week
07 - Musical Mirage Revisited
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APW - Archive Photo a Week
Camera:
Nikon D70
Lens:
Nikon AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 18-70mm f/3.5-4.5G IF-ED
Date:
Jun 4, 2007
Aperture:
f4.2
ISO:
200
Shutter:
13s
Date Uploaded:
Feb 20, 2009
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This was the photo I used for one of my first challenges at DPC, in a painting with light challenge. This is my original entry:
The original photo itself is:
Hopefully I have improved ;)
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Melethia
Olympus OM-D E-M1 Mark III
Canon EF 24-105mm f/4.0 L IS
03/02/2009 05:01:46 AM
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Nice clean edit. I think your crop also works better in this version.
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Neil
Fujifilm X-T30
Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 24-70mm f/2.8G ED
02/23/2009 11:02:31 PM
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Much better crop, especially for this size; Glad to see you got rid of the extra orange. One other thing I'd suggest is some shadow/highlight or dodge to bring out the dark areas of the mouthpiece. Overall, well done.
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lynnesite
Canon EOS-1D X
Canon EF 70-200mm f/2.8 L IS USM II
02/22/2009 11:45:17 PM
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I like everything except the extra sharpening, I think it would rock without it!
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jomari
Nikon D7000
Nikon AF-S DX 18-105 f/3.5-5.6 ED VR
02/22/2009 06:25:40 PM
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Boosting the contrast to get rid of the visible detail in the black has made a vast improvement, giving the picture much more impact.
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Ken
Canon EOS-7D
Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8 L USM
02/22/2009 01:15:27 AM
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I like the boost in contrast and change in composition, but the increase in saturation and sharpening makes the sax seems a bit unnatural.
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Kelli
Canon EOS-D60
Canon EF 28-135mm f/3.5-5.6 IS USM
02/21/2009 11:30:53 AM
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Fantastic reedit! It makes a huge difference!
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