The light is a bit harsh, especially with the reflection on the apple. I might have also desaturated the skin a bit to get it a little closer to the book cover.
I have not read the book or seen the movie, but the hype over it has been quite annoying.
Your recreation is not bad, but I think it suffers from harsh lighting. The reflection of the light on the apple is very hard and the direct light on the skin is also quite harsh.