The original here was an abstract, intentionally-blurred shot that was supposed to look like a beach although it was actually a bottle.
You have improved on the original in the sense that this is a better yellow for a "yellow" challenge and in the sense that your image is sharper and has a more dynamic composition.
It's decently made but, in my estimation, doesn't qualify as a reworking of the original in that it shares nothing except the yellow theme. Accordingly, a 5 for now from me, though I may re-evaluate depending on what I see as I go deeper into the challenge. |