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02/18/2009 02:26:27 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Looking at the original image, this has a big improvement. the lighting is much softer and overall has a soothing feel to it.
My eyes keep searching for more in this image, I would have loved to see some more and not cropped so abruptly at the top. Also I don't see a reason to use a shallower depth of field here. the blur on the foreground subjects is distracting IMO.
For the same image, I would think a deeper depth of field will help. Also sharpening after resizing would make things better here.
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-Gaurawa |
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02/10/2009 02:26:47 AM |
Checked the original. Big improvement here.
Very nice clarity and detail with lovely frosty blue colors. I feel it could have been even nicer still if you had used the allowable height of the frame to full advantage thereby not cropping of the tops of the pieces at the top of the frame and having a bit more space at the bottom of the frame. 6 |
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02/09/2009 05:24:11 PM |
| Though better than the original, there is a lack of clarity and transparency to this shot. |
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