This is Kari Ann, greetings from the Critique Club:
composition: nice use of Rule of thirds, and leading lines lead my eye down the row nicely
color:vibrant colors, a tad strong though.
contrast: good contrast in a general term
focus: nicely done on the front buddha
depth of field: I really like how you used such a shallow depth of field, its refreshing. And that last buddha is awesome, almost like a cluster of stars
lighting: Way too harsh for a still life. Try diffusing the light or finding an alternative light source for better results
other: In technical terms, its a bit of a miss. The colors are oversaturated, and the lighting is glaring. But, from a sensical point of view, its very interesting. I keep a buddha by my computer desk, for extra luck when editing photos. :-D. I hope to see your portfolio grow in the coming months here at DPC, you certainly live in a place where photographic opportunities await. If you have any other questions or concerns, feel free to PM me anytime.
-Kari Ann |
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