Nice pic, but it lacks something to really make it interesting. Yes the green trail does sort of lead the eye, but to what? Add a person or something to make it more interesting.
Shooting straight down the trail draws the eye fine, however there is no place for it to go -- the trail just ends with no indication that it continues on past that point. If the shot had been taken at a bit more of an angle, say with the trail travelling from the lowever left to the upper-right third corner, the trail would attempt to draw the viewer in even further with the appearance that it continues.
I'll be really interested to see how this scores - it's the kind of terrritory I've tried to shoot for myself, but with no real success: I think it perhaps requires more mystical light, or perhaps fog or mist, to give a sense of drama and depth. One of those scenes that is quite pleasing to experience, but somehow never photographs convincingly without a lot of work.
The yellows of the spring greens work very well with the dead grasses from the previous year. Nice trail, nice picture. Easy to hang on a wall as a remembrance throughout the year of a fragrant walk in spring.
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