Ummm ... I'm taken already. Good choice for a personalized card for your special someone. The head position is classic, and the background is handled especially well. Her eyes seem to be looking just a hair camera left of the lens center. Having the eyes shift slightly more to camera right might create an impression of stronger communication. To my taste, the amount of negative space caused by including so much of the hair on our left shifts the balance of the image unfavorably. You might consider experimenting with having the right left side a bit closer to the shoulder seam, maybe balanced by a little trimmed from the top. Others may disagree.
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