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12/16/2008 09:05:15 AM |
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12/14/2008 02:54:55 PM |
| Nice image, may have looked better with more light |
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12/12/2008 10:10:11 PM |
| Nice idea but the lighting is harsh and bad, and the fountain pen is mostly underexposed. Shadow in the lower right is distracting. |
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12/12/2008 07:24:36 PM |
| The shadow in the foreground is very distracting. |
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12/12/2008 11:34:13 AM |
| I think if you had a quill instead of a calligraphy pen, this would've worked better. It could also use more/better lighting, and the front corner of the paper is oddly shadowed and distracting. |
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12/12/2008 11:09:28 AM |
| Interesting idea. I feel that the cropping is odd. The chopped off left corner of the paper looks out. Also, that shadow on the lower right corner is quite distracting. |
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12/11/2008 10:33:21 PM |
| a little dark, and there is a shadow in the front |
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12/11/2008 08:41:38 PM |
| Nice literal interpretation, and the handwriting fits well. The shadow on the front of the paper is distracting. If this were lit from an extremely low angle--so that it brought out the paper's texture--I think it would have been better. |
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12/11/2008 02:04:56 PM |
| good idea but i can see a shadow near to the front of the picture. 6 |
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12/11/2008 10:32:56 AM |
| Nice idea but the shadow on the paper and from the pens is distracting |
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12/10/2008 09:24:33 AM |
| That shadow at the bottom on the paper is very distracting to me. I like the pov. |
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12/10/2008 09:17:58 AM |
| Good idea, but I think your execution leaves something to be desired. I think if you had more light, or softer light, we'd get to see more of your pens. |
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12/10/2008 09:12:23 AM |
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12/10/2008 01:58:42 AM |
| Great concept, but the execution (esp. the lighting) needs a little work. |
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