Critique Club
Thanks for your request. This is a tough shot to critique, as abstracts tend to be open to interpretation. I still have no idea what this shot is trying to convey! Hopefully after this comment you will post more context in your details. The simplicity of the composition is a strength, but for the moment, I don't understand the use of the sky, and that drags down my enjoyment of the photograph. I disagree with the comments below about the lighting. Yes, fill flash is demonstrated and evident, but it seems a bit too much, as contrast is lacking. Finally, the focus is good. Overall interesting shot, I hope you post more details. If you do, please PM me.
Cheers!
-BS |