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AmeedEl-Ghoul


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Challenge: Fill Flash (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-20D
Lens: Tamron SP AF 28-75mm f/2.8 XR Di for Canon
Location: Basement,
Date: Dec 4, 2008
Aperture: f/8
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/200
Galleries: Photo-Impressionism
Date Uploaded: Dec 5, 2008

 Open RAW, Crop, Contrast, curves, add noise filter to the entire image, USM, SFW.

3 Light sources,
1- Alienbees AB800 camera right, with brolly set at 1/16
2- Vivitar 285HV camera left with shoot through umbrella set at 1/4
3- Vivitar 285HV below camera with shoot through umbrella set at 1/16 for fill light.

About the hair cut, I thought to try something different :)

Statistics
Place: 34 out of 79
Avg (all users): 5.5972
Avg (commenters): 8.0000
Avg (participants): 5.3226
Avg (non-participants): 5.6432
Views since voting: 818
Views during voting: 400
Votes: 216
Comments: 7
Favorites: 1 (view)

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AuthorThread
 12/23/2008 09:25:50 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club...

I was not able to vote on this challenge, but if I had, I probably would have given you a 5 or 6.

My first impression is that I like the balanced composition, and overall dark colours. I'm not sure the hair style adds to the photograph, but it doesn't take away from it either. You finished with a decent score, but I think that there were other photographs in the challenge that better demonstrated "fill flash". So while you did have a fill flash shooting up at the model, the overall feel of the photograph is that of fairly balanced lighting. To increase your score, I think a more dramatic light source might be needed. Keep up the good work.

If you need any clarification on any of my comments, please feel free to pm me. It might take some time for me to get back to you.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/14/2008 08:14:31 PM
This model is a ham(let). Nice shot, even though I find the monochrome black and white check and pattern dressing style pretty lousy, and not very photogenic- but it works for you. good luck.
 12/14/2008 09:44:03 AM
hope he shaved the rest of his head after this shoot! Nice job with the exposure ... focus us spot on also ...
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/13/2008 08:08:52 PM
very nice concept and use of fill flash
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/13/2008 12:41:08 AM
The picture is very well taken; As for theme, I guess the purpose is to use flash for fill and not as the only light source. 7.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/12/2008 04:41:40 PM
Fantastic picture, funny but I have a friend who looks just like this guy, obviously without the staggered hair / beard. Hope this does well.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/10/2008 03:50:39 AM
Fill flash?


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