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05/17/2004 01:20:03 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
This is a great idea. The shot is just a tiny bit tilted, which definitely should have been corrected. Also, the top of the shot is a little softer than the rest. Perhaps you could have aimed your camera just a few degrees down, showing a little more into the horizon.
The rust definitely shows, and I love the leading lines. Overall, a nice shot. |
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05/11/2004 12:44:54 PM |
| I'd like this to be a bit sharper, but I love the point of view. |
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05/10/2004 12:25:25 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 7
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 9
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 9
Total Averaged Rating 7.50 Dick
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05/10/2004 11:46:23 AM |
| interesting lines. nice composition. just a thought, but try cropping the top down to about an inch or so above the first arch. |
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05/10/2004 11:08:20 AM |
| I like this one it kinda drags me into it and I forget myself in it :D |
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05/10/2004 05:43:20 AM |
| Nice perspective! Maybe move a little bit towards the bottom of the frame to show the rails going further into the horizon. 7 |
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05/09/2004 07:25:09 AM |
| One of my favorites here! I love the lines and contrast! Good luck! 10 |
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05/08/2004 06:11:26 PM |
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05/08/2004 03:23:53 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 3
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 6
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05/07/2004 06:49:37 PM |
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05/07/2004 10:06:22 AM |
| nice shot but it isn't straight. I couldn't figure out what was bothering me about this picture and then it hit me. its just slightly unbalanced and for me personally, makes me dizzy. I would have also tried to get more distance and less up applying the rule of thirds. |
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05/07/2004 04:52:05 AM |
| The light at the top of the photo seems a bit overpowering and distracting. The lines and perspective are good. |
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05/07/2004 01:31:31 AM |
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05/07/2004 12:37:41 AM |
| Really a sweeping feeling. Great find, and terrific capture! |
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05/06/2004 10:01:27 PM |
| So magestic, what else can be better than the best picture on the challenge? |
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05/06/2004 03:59:36 PM |
| Like the subject and symetry of the picture. I would have liked it more if the picture was a bit sharper. |
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05/05/2004 06:39:32 PM |
| Nice composition--really compells the eye to keep looking! |
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05/05/2004 01:26:23 AM |
| Nice. Good depth of field. |
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05/05/2004 12:26:50 AM |
| It's a really great picture! love it! |
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