Is it weird that I really don't get what is trying to be said here? Your tones are nice but I'm a bit lost. You still get points for focus and colour because that is really good. Feel free to explain after rollover. Good luck :)
I like the dimples of her lower back. An interesting picture. Why would you pick her to do this? Is it posed? Is it candid? I can't decide. Either way, why does she have her top off? 6
going out on the balcony like that, is what causes creepers to stare haha the sepia looks good, the light is hitting her nicely. i just don't think i understand the shot.