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05/14/2004 01:27:07 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
This is a fantastic abstract. The colors are strong and complementary, and while the objects are kind of, well, nebulous, the little bubbles from the 7-Up give you something to get a sharp focus on, which you did fairly well.
Personally, I think that the upper-left half is a little dark compared to the lower-right half. It seems you have more light shining through the ice on the lower-right, which really brightens it up. I think that making the light gradient more uniform would be the only suggestion I have to improve this shot.
Have a nice day! |
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05/09/2004 12:32:35 PM |
| Beautiful colors, beautivul composition and certainly very abstract. |
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05/09/2004 05:58:54 AM |
| lovely colours Great abstract well done |
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05/08/2004 09:21:14 AM |
| Pastel and watercolour feeling to this....... beautiful stuff |
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05/05/2004 05:50:44 PM |
| bubbles detract a bit from what's underneath -- that looks very interesting |
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05/04/2004 07:55:24 PM |
| How lovely, these colors look beautiful together. Looks like it must be some kind of liquid but whatever it is - I like looking at it! |
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05/04/2004 11:45:18 AM |
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05/03/2004 05:19:52 PM |
| beautful color and composition. a little weak on structural elements but the other aspects of this pleasing image make it very successful. |
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05/03/2004 05:14:48 PM |
| Very nice. It looks like a painting. |
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05/03/2004 02:37:33 PM |
| I like the colors and it is a real abstract. Only the lower left corner is distracting. |
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05/03/2004 12:07:30 PM |
| Evocative, attractive abstract. Good colors. Nice idea. There is a semicircular outline near the bottom of the frame that looks like a water spot that I would have cloned out. Given your title, I might have used selective color to maximize the blackness of the blacks, blues and cyans to give it a darker background and a more "space like" feel. Terrific job, though... you are to be commended. |
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05/03/2004 08:50:00 AM |
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05/03/2004 12:45:14 AM |
| Outstanding, this is gorgeous! Very creative and a wonderful use of colors and shapes. 10 |
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05/03/2004 12:38:01 AM |
| Like this one a lot. The only complaints I have are the bottom left corner, where the lines look different and draw your attention away, and what appears to be a scratch in the lower left third of the photo. Great colors. |
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