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11/22/2008 03:31:40 AM |
Originally posted by FocusPoint:
Hello from Critique Club :)
I see steel more than aluminum, but I don't care what the subject is, let's take a look at the photo.
Nice colors, sharp and nice focus on the edge of the "thing" You should have dodge the bright area a little bit more, but it's not that bad. I like the lighting here, from back, the shadows are the main attraction (I know you were hoping people would like them too).
Having three dimension look on your photo is giving much better feeling rather than a flat photo.
I believe 5.8 for this photo is pretty much on target... over average. The composition got you a good points, sharpness and color also got you some more good votes.
If you had only the front end of this thing and not the back of it, I think it would look better. Don't cut it, whatever this is, but put cardboard or paper behind it, and shoot it that way. You won't have many shadows in the back, but I like cleaner photos :)
I checked your page, photos look very nice. You do have a style, develop that and you might be one of kind.
Keep up the good work, and practice without mercy :)
Leo |
Leo, man this was the best critique I've recived from a long time :) percice and to the point :)
I specially liked the one of kind point :) just kidding,
Thanks allot for the time and efforts analyzing the picture,
I owe you a coffee/drink whenever you drop by Montreal :)
All the best and thanks once again,
Ameed, |
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11/21/2008 08:57:25 PM |
Hello from Critique Club :)
I see steel more than aluminum, but I don't care what the subject is, let's take a look at the photo.
Nice colors, sharp and nice focus on the edge of the "thing" You should have dodge the bright area a little bit more, but it's not that bad. I like the lighting here, from back, the shadows are the main attraction (I know you were hoping people would like them too).
Having three dimension look on your photo is giving much better feeling rather than a flat photo.
I believe 5.8 for this photo is pretty much on target... over average. The composition got you a good points, sharpness and color also got you some more good votes.
If you had only the front end of this thing and not the back of it, I think it would look better. Don't cut it, whatever this is, but put cardboard or paper behind it, and shoot it that way. You won't have many shadows in the back, but I like cleaner photos :)
I checked your page, photos look very nice. You do have a style, develop that and you might be one of kind.
Keep up the good work, and practice without mercy :)
Leo |
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11/16/2008 09:22:30 PM |
| Beautiful perspective. I love the cool blue colortone. |
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11/16/2008 09:13:47 PM |
| i like the use of repeating shapes - just not convinced on the choice of color |
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11/15/2008 10:15:49 PM |
| Nice pattern and color, but I'd prefer the focus to be a bit deeper into this shot, unless the rim is your intended focal point. |
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11/14/2008 09:05:48 PM |
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11/12/2008 08:46:49 PM |
| Great patterns, composition and light. |
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11/12/2008 06:34:33 PM |
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11/12/2008 01:54:58 AM |
Not very pleasing to my eye but sharp. Too busy and I just don't see the photographic value in this.
To produce a sharp picture in this day and age is just not too hard with even el-cheapo snap shot cameras with built in IS and 10MP. We (including myself) really have to learn taking pictures that conveys something else than the objects by them selves - as long as their not intended for stock photography of course. |
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11/11/2008 10:12:30 PM |
| would prefer less blue, but nice content and shapes |
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11/11/2008 04:42:12 PM |
| Very nice design composition and nicely shot. |
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11/11/2008 03:21:08 PM |
| I like the cool feel of the picture |
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11/11/2008 12:59:07 PM |
| good abstract image, toning works perfect here |
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11/11/2008 12:54:28 PM |
| love the color here, great dof. i cant quite decide if the rail at the top is distracting or not... |
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11/11/2008 12:44:21 PM |
| I cannot determine what this is, but I like the image, good composition, good light, good use of DOF |
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11/11/2008 09:36:03 AM |
| Very beautiful abstract. Clean,clear and precise. Love the steelish blue hues. |
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