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Once a garden now ...
Once a garden now ...
JohannesFrank


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Abandoned (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Nikon D3
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 18-70mm f/3.5-4.5G IF-ED
Location: Reykjavik
Date: Nov 2, 2008
Aperture: 4,5
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/50
Galleries: Urban, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Nov 2, 2008

Photo work with Nik Silver Efex Pro framing in PS3 and small adjust in curves few spot removed

Statistics
Place: 43 out of 148
Avg (all users): 5.8000
Avg (commenters): 6.8889
Avg (participants): 5.9074
Avg (non-participants): 5.7183
Views since voting: 1043
Views during voting: 246
Votes: 125
Comments: 14
Favorites: 2 (view)


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11/16/2008 06:18:18 AM
Thank you all fore your nice comment and Thank´s Leo for taking time to critique.
joe
11/16/2008 01:41:27 AM
Hello from Critique Club :)

The drama is right there front of me. I like the way you did this picture right from the start.

Technically, nice exposed, clean, sharp image. F stop right on the money :)

Composition, very well. Some photos like this one need subject on the middle because of the surroundings. You did cover-up some stuff with post process which is good because it brings the old house more to our attention. Here is one little thing that I would do, crop it more and bring the whole building a bit closer. Not much, but just a little bit. First look, I can't see the broken wall, it would be nice to see it closer.

Overall it is a very nicely done challenge photo. I would give 7, 5.8 probably little low, should be around 6.1 in my opinion. This doesn NOT deserve 2s or 3s at all... Damn trolls LOL

I checked your work, you know what you are doing, keep it up. Very good photos, I am sure you will be winning another ribbon soon :)

Good luck,

Leo
 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/08/2008 09:59:45 PM
Creepy. Well done.
11/08/2008 01:01:57 AM
spooky!
11/05/2008 06:25:44 PM
Hauntingly beautiful.
11/05/2008 05:44:30 PM
great towns and comp! one of *my* favorites!
i meant tones. ;)
bumping to 9
11/05/2008 11:52:00 AM
Great mood and thought left unspoken. 7
11/03/2008 10:27:47 PM
Great photo ... like the BW like the contrast ... well done
11/03/2008 07:05:28 PM
Nice Tone on this one. I am big fan of vignetting, as long as it looks more natural. Here it looks too uniform and forced. Good luck. No vote just comments
11/03/2008 07:05:19 PM
Meets Challenge:2
Technical:2
Interestingness:2
Creativity:1
TOTAL: 7
11/03/2008 12:37:21 PM
Beautiful tones. That tree really sets off the old building.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
11/03/2008 11:12:12 AM
I like the contrast.
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11/03/2008 10:46:52 AM
I would like this better if the trees acted more like a frame to the shot rather than blocking the building...
  Photographer found comment helpful.
11/03/2008 10:08:12 AM
This really portrays abandoned including the bared trees! However, I think it may take a creaming because of the lack of focus and detail in the main subject. I could be wrong and hope that I am!
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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