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11/16/2008 01:56:09 AM |
Hello from Critique Club :)
I think the story here if you abandoned a dog, there will be another one who will be comforting it.... which is a nice story, I can see it from the first look.
Technically, nice exposure, only white dog's tail is over exposed, but it's normal. I wish you would wait for the sun go down a bit more, or hurry up before sun goes up that high, I don't know the time, so basically the sunlight here bit harsh.
Composition is pretty good. The other dog far side is taking a bit more attention, although I couldn't see it at first, I know it's there. The road itself is very nice; DOF is very nice, not too harsh, meaning not too tight.
I personally would crop this a bit more to bring out the "feeling" of the story. I would bring them to middle; keep it bit more tight...
I checked your work... Good stuff you have there. I think you are pretty close to get your first ribbon ;) Just keep trying. I always tell everyone to check out the previous winners, they are very encouraging bunch of samples.
Good luck
Leo |
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11/09/2008 10:57:11 PM |
| Cute composition, but abandoned? I'm probably missing something... |
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11/09/2008 10:07:22 PM |
| Great capture. The decisive moment... sniff! |
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11/07/2008 05:05:47 PM |
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11/05/2008 10:53:19 PM |
| Good capture of a personal moment. 6 |
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11/04/2008 10:34:34 PM |
| cute shot! Just doesn't say abandoned to me |
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11/04/2008 07:02:47 PM |
| A sort of "Lady and the Tramp" story. I like it! Great use of dof for emphasis. |
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11/03/2008 07:07:17 PM |
| very cool shot but i wonder how it follows the theme, great dof and capture of light |
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11/03/2008 06:55:02 PM |
Meets Challenge:2
Technical:2
Interestingness:2
Creativity:2
TOTAL: 8 |
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11/03/2008 02:47:39 PM |
| I love doggies. I like the composition here. |
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11/03/2008 01:30:31 PM |
| Nice DOF and vanishing point. |
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