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05/06/2004 01:51:01 AM |
Greetings from the Critque Club!
Composition: The placement of the ladybug and the horizon of the egg in the upper third really helps to bring this together visually. As I stated during the competition, I'd like to see more of the egg - the title is really the only thing that tells me that it is an egg, I don't know if it'd get that without it and I like the idea of the similarly shaped subjects.
Background: Good neutral background keeps our eyes on the subject.
Camera Work: (Focus/DOF/) the focus is just a little soft on the bug, I'd like to see the legs and head very crisp on this. DOF is spot on.
Post Processing: n/a
Appropriateness for the challenge: very - gives a sense of scale to both objects. More egg would help me.
My Opinion: A very nice shot, pleasing and with a sense of whimsy. The colors are wonderful. I've seen a lot of ladybugs that are more orange lately in my yard and they wouldn't have worked nearly as well as this wonderfully rich colored one.
I hope these comments are of use to you, please note that if you can. Feel free to PM me or leave a note here if you have any other comments. |
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05/04/2004 10:10:44 PM |
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05/04/2004 09:02:35 PM |
| Super idea. The fuzziness of the egg horizon brings forth a comparison to the curvature of moons and planets. |
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05/04/2004 12:48:55 AM |
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05/01/2004 10:04:38 PM |
| a little noisy, lighting not so good, could be sharper. nice colors and border |
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04/28/2004 07:53:18 PM |
nice photo
you should have cleaned up the white palate |
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04/28/2004 03:59:39 PM |
| I like this very much. I like the repetition of the curvature of the beetle and the eggshell. The photo could be a little sharper but I like the contrast of colors. I'm curious to know if a wider shot with more of the egg showing would be more successful compositionally. |
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04/28/2004 03:31:46 PM |
| Cool idea. Brighter colors on the ladybug would enhance it. |
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04/28/2004 02:20:15 AM |
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