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09/22/2008 11:17:17 AM |
| I'm guessing it's safety from yourself through pills??? I don't really know...but I don't like the execution. The lighting isn't the best and it seems out of focus. |
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09/19/2008 07:54:42 PM |
| Hmmm, kind of a mixed message here. |
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09/19/2008 09:06:41 AM |
Sorry, but I don't see "safety" in a lot of pills spelling "forget her"?
Looking at the image though, there's a confusion with the light sources here.. one top right, another bottom left, yet there's not really enough light in the top left where your message begins... and the ripped paper? Is there any significance to it? Does it add to the story? Perhaps some words from a letter the "her" or a poem, or a song might have given more depth to the story, and this image. |
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09/19/2008 06:27:29 AM |
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09/18/2008 06:30:41 PM |
Meets the challenge: 2
Color and lighting: 0
Focus and DOF: 0
Originality: 1
Camera angle: 0
Aesthetic appeal: 0
IMO, it doesnt meet the challenge. It is hard to understand the topic: safety at last. |
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09/18/2008 03:51:36 PM |
| Wow, are you ok? Seriously - that's kind of heavy. I hope you take your own words of advice and we'll see you back again next week ok? OK! |
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09/18/2008 02:25:38 PM |
| Hmmm... escape more than safe, perhaps? Interesting interpretation, though. |
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09/18/2008 10:15:24 AM |
Really provocative photo. A great idea, and I think it meets the challenge very well.
Though your concept is great, there are some technical issues with this photo IMHO. I think if the shadows were closer and darker, it would be more effective. I wish the photo wasn't cropped so close.
Excellent idea, and you get points for originally, which in my opinion is severely lacking here. |
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09/17/2008 08:24:09 PM |
I always thought using pills or other substances to forget someone was a bad idea and very unsafe. I'm not sure how this could be safe at all.
But about the photo, the lighting is nice, but would be better if the lower left light were moved a bit farther away. The background is also kinda distracting. A plain background (white, black, or maybe green to contrast the red) might look better. |
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09/17/2008 04:09:40 PM |
| I think I get the meaning of this; I like it, the shadows are awfully harsh though on the forget, I think a different light source would've been good. |
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09/17/2008 01:45:58 PM |
| A good idea but let down by the lighting and the poor choice of background. |
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09/17/2008 11:22:39 AM |
| Poor lighting, forgettable background, not the strongest subject for the challenge topic. |
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09/17/2008 09:43:52 AM |
| For me, the overexposed lighting in the bottom left corner is damaging to the picture. |
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