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Lonni


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Camera: Nikon D80
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX NIKKOR 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6G ED VR II
Date: Sep 10, 2008
Aperture: 3.5
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/100
Date Uploaded: Sep 10, 2008

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Comments: 4
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These are our friends and their little daughter, who was born 3 weeks ago, 5 weeks early.

Converted from Raw, adjust WB, increased contrast, burned baby's clothes and lady's jacket, dodged lady's glasses (transitions lenses transitioned in the sunlight). Added vignette (need to learn how do this a bit more subtly).

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09/13/2008 06:17:54 PM
Caught a great moment with these very happy folks.
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09/11/2008 08:30:07 AM
They do look very happy! You can tell the expressions are genuine. Nice job with the glasses, those types are a nightmare for photography.
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09/11/2008 12:34:27 AM
I can't add much to what K10DGuy said about the technicals. However, what jumps out at me are those genuine smiles of the proud parents, and their size compared to their daughter, demonstrating how fragile life is.
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09/10/2008 06:56:18 PM
I'm sure that if you hadn't pointed it out in your comments that I wouldn't have noticed it, but now that I do, I can't say that the burning on the baby's clothing or the mother's jacket is something that I like a lot. It looks rather unrealistic once noticeable, and doesn't really add anything to the shot. What I would have done differently is used a smaller brush size and burned the shadows that are already *there* to get them to stand out a tiny bit more, if anything. (although even then, there are better ways to darken the shadows.)

Over-all, however, it's a cute little scene with some genuine expressions, which is always great. The brick wall kind of adds a 'depressive' feel to the shot, which contrasts a bit with the happy expressions. Not sure if you had much other choice of background, but even moving them out from the wall and standing back to zoom in a bit to get a shallower DOF would have helped immensely, I think.

Nice control of the exposure too.
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