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05/09/2004 09:18:18 PM |
Hello from the Critique Club!
This is really a nice rural shot, and I think it's a strong connection to the idea for the challenge. It's a nice setting with some interesting features - the silos, hills in the background, the greeness of the area against the white buildings and greenhouses. They all work well together here, I think.
I agree with everyone else that the biggest change I would make to this shot is to adjust the rotation to correct the "tilt". I might also like to see the colors brightened up just a bit, but others may have a different opinion on that.
Cropping seems to be okay. I might also crop out a little more on the left hand side to bring the focus more on the main part of your scene.
It's an nice entry for this challenge. I hope this has been helpful! |
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05/02/2004 10:31:26 PM |
| nice shot. would be better with some tilt correction... |
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05/02/2004 05:32:33 PM |
| Nice shot I think, except for the tilt. I would rotate a bit counter clockwise. |
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05/02/2004 05:18:00 PM |
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05/01/2004 09:17:24 PM |
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05/01/2004 02:58:31 PM |
| is it tilted slightly? when you have such strong uprights they can creat an illisusion of tilt even if they aren't. Better to straighten them. I like the composition, three silos, three white buildings, repeating hills. nice 7 |
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04/30/2004 08:45:32 PM |
| Feels like this image is tipped clockwise a bit. |
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04/30/2004 06:31:18 PM |
| Image seems to have a strange tilt, although it is flat. |
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04/30/2004 05:51:52 AM |
| I like the impression but it feels to me that the vertical structures (silos, buildings, fenceposes, etc) are skewed by about 2 or 2.5 degrees clockwise. I think rotating the image back and recropping would have helped me to enjoy the scene more. Also the tree on the far left side extends into the photo and breaks the continuous skyline. I think it would be worth it to crop the photo so that those branches weren't in the photo; I know it would mean losing the leftmost silo but I think that would make a more compelling story. I do like this rural setting more (reminds me of where I live). |
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04/29/2004 08:34:26 AM |
| Horizon being unlevel is something I find unsettling, and it detracts from the shot. |
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04/28/2004 02:48:29 PM |
| tilt very noticeable on silos |
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04/28/2004 08:57:22 AM |
| Looks tilting from left to right. |
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04/27/2004 12:13:55 PM |
| It's all on a bit of an angle, rotation would have helped a lot. |
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