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09/15/2008 04:33:26 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Hi Katie,
I see you've entered one challenge so far - welcome to DPC! You'll find this is a great place to get a lot of very good advice to help you move forward with photography. In looking over your comments, you've already received some excellent advice and suggestions for this particular entry with respect to composition, focus, lighting. One thing you might want to look at before your next entry is a tutorial on how to size your images to give the most impact within the limits of DPC. That tutorial is here.
I do hope you'll try another challenge!
If you have any questions or comments about this critique, feel free to send me a Private Message (click on my name to go to my profile page, then click on the Private Message link.)
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09/09/2008 11:43:18 AM |
| ah, I love pooh, even as a gangsta, too bad picture isn't a little bigger |
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09/06/2008 09:11:55 PM |
| too small to really judge properly- overall it seems like a very low quality JPG... take advantage of the size options available... its easier to judge an image that one can see finer detail in |
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09/06/2008 07:10:31 PM |
| Blurry,looks like a snapshot. |
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09/06/2008 08:22:33 AM |
| I would have liked to have seen some more time and effort spent on this. The size could be bigger, the contrast/tonal ranges could have been enriched, and the concept expanded upon in more depth. The tilt is good, the focus softness could work.......I hope you see this comment as intended to be helpful. Good luck in the challenge. |
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09/04/2008 05:49:32 PM |
Focus seems a bit off. I would pay more attention to composition and lighting. Shadows on the left of the image are distracting and the angle is somewhat awkward for me.
Just my opinion. :) |
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09/04/2008 03:58:28 PM |
| Rather flat light, very little detail. |
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09/04/2008 03:16:05 AM |
| nice angle but the focus seems to be off ... camera shake maybe. Try resting your camera on a table or chair and some books to get the correct height if you dont have a tripod |
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09/03/2008 01:50:52 PM |
| Would be better if was crisp & in focus |
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09/03/2008 11:02:49 AM |
subject too far away. out of focus. light is didtracting.
the "angled" approach does not work well here. |
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09/03/2008 02:29:18 AM |
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