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04/27/2004 02:00:09 PM |
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04/25/2004 10:03:46 PM |
| I would have cropped a bit more off the left side. The tiny bit of flowers and the rust color distract. I also don't like the border. That said, this is one of my favorite pictures in the contest. Good luck! |
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04/25/2004 12:19:21 PM |
| Precise application of the rule of thirds (place the objects of interest at the junction of lines dividing the frame into 3 equal parts) will give you a better composition. Crop out the small bit of flower at the left edge as well. |
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04/25/2004 12:25:02 AM |
| I can see how this represents serendipity, because the flowers are not where they should be. I like the way you've composed this as well, and the exposure is spot on. The geometry of the sidewalk works well too. One of my two favorites to ribbon. |
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04/23/2004 09:18:10 PM |
| Nice idea, great execution. My onlt problem is the small pink area (merger) on the left edge. |
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04/22/2004 08:51:21 PM |
| Nice abstract. I like the colors and simpleness. |
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04/22/2004 06:32:27 AM |
| great, except the border. It's just far too wide and overpowering. Love the diagonals though |
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04/21/2004 09:19:45 PM |
| This is excellent. Great sense of composition. Almost looks like an aerial shot of two forests of blooming pink trees, prairies and roads. Surrendipitous. 9 |
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04/21/2004 04:05:42 PM |
| Looks like it belongs on a wall. |
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04/21/2004 03:13:43 PM |
| Lovely colors and shapes. I wish the little flowers were slightly more in focus but still sings of the idea of serendipity to me - finding gentle beauty in an unlikely place. |
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04/21/2004 12:22:44 AM |
| Quite a beautiful composition. Consider recropping a bit to the right so the little flowers on the left would be left out of the frame. |
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