CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Compositionally, I think this shot would benefit from a slightly different crop. If there were more space on the right for her to "look" into, and less empty space on the left. I think this would give the shot more of a balanced feeling.
Technically, it is a good capture. There is some noise visible in the darker areas, and overall this hurts your clarity, etc.
Overall, it is a good portrait. Without the title, frankly, I would be lost as to which "sin" is was representing. This may have hurt with other voters. It is a good candid, and would probably make a good bw as well.
Karma
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