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07/08/2008 08:17:00 PM |
You were wondering why this didn't do better. Well, there are some things I can add that might be the reason.
First off, the lighting on the girl is fine! Point of view might be a little higher. Her pose is a little forced, also her smile. The background isn't something of my taste (I always think this is a typical American background, but I love black ad white backgrounds ;)) and it's wrinkeled. If you place the model a bit forward, away from the BG, it will get more out of focus and I think that works better.
Well these are some things that come to mind. Not saying it's the truth, but just my humble opinion ;) |
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07/07/2008 08:58:48 PM |
| Nice portrait, love the smile looks like Eleanor is having a hard time not laughing. Made me smile! |
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07/07/2008 08:57:23 PM |
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07/06/2008 11:56:14 AM |
| A little different lighting to get rid of the shadow would help I think. |
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07/05/2008 12:45:35 PM |
| very sweet photo, she looks so angelic, yet a little miscevious at the same time. nice work |
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07/04/2008 03:59:57 AM |
| nice studio image, lovely girl, beautiful smile...I am not a fan of this type of backdrop. I think it has been used too much and might be a little old now, but lighting and her innocence comes through 7 |
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07/03/2008 12:55:50 PM |
| Beautiful child & neat pose. I would try to get less shadow on the BG to the right. Perhaps a smaller aperture to start blurring the details of the canvas? |
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07/02/2008 09:03:34 PM |
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07/02/2008 08:43:37 AM |
| The lighting on her is even, however the background is too distracting. Shoot her further away from the drapes in a shallower DOF. It will give almost a bokeh feeling and it will make her stand out more. |
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07/01/2008 07:12:38 AM |
| Nice capture...needs more contrast work and less GB/Neat Image over the skin and dress bodice. |
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