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07/23/2008 10:20:17 PM |
| Beautiful children! A lovely shot |
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07/06/2008 10:36:24 AM |
| If I had voted this challenge I would have been your 7th 10. This is a fantastic shot. As far as the redhead breaking hearts, LOL both pair of those mischievous eyes, here in a few years are gonna be heart breakers. I hope you are preparing yourself for it. Coming a father of a 16 year old.. |
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06/27/2008 06:05:21 PM |
Critique Club Review:
Color Saturationa and Hue are very good. The skin tones are very well done. Brightness and contrast are good, although the whites of the dresses are right at burn-out in a couple of areas.
Focus and depth of fied are excellent. Everything that should be nice and sharp, is.
The liquid or wetness of the hair, is a bit odd, and distracts a little from the photo. Makes you wonder why two girls appear to be lying in a pool of water. It also flattens and discolors the hair a bit. A tiny bit wider shot so that the shoulders were not cut off, would be interesting, but then was there enough hair to carry it?
Overall a very good picture. As for the score, I think you have already hit on the issue. It has already been done with more girls and more hair, by scalvert. Had it not been done before, I think you would have made top ten. Voters are funny that way. |
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06/26/2008 06:27:47 AM |
| Love how you set this up, Jeffrey! You have some beautiful daughters! |
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06/25/2008 10:50:36 AM |
BEAUTIFUL GIRLS JEFFREY! WATCH OUR FOR THE REDHEAD-SHE'S GONNA BE AHEART BREAKER! :)
NICE FINISH TOO!
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06/25/2008 09:24:04 AM |
| Jeffrey, congrats on top 20! this is such a fun shot, and I'm sure your family loves it! |
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06/25/2008 08:06:14 AM |
| Congrats, Jeffrey, this did well! I love Amelia's expression - just about to burst into giggles :-) |
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06/25/2008 07:53:42 AM |
Hey Jeffrey, good job (as always)! You know I love the red hair (and can't forget the gorgeous brunettte too). I really like the diagonal you have going too. I really like the big grin vs the shy smile.
Much congrats on a top 20.
Now ... show us the other contenders (after vacation, of course)!
Message edited by author 2008-06-25 07:54:29. |
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06/25/2008 06:22:45 AM |
| Jeff - Congrats on the great finish. You have two very pretty models to work with (they must have got it from your wife!) I love the tribute to scalvert's shot. |
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06/25/2008 12:38:03 AM |
| Congratulations on top 20 Jeffrey! |
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06/25/2008 12:17:33 AM |
| This came out so very well - what a delightful shot of your girls! Great smiles, nice light, and the crop works well. |
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06/24/2008 11:52:18 PM |
Gotta' love the hair here. Great job on this - hard for a shot like this to not put a smile on one's face - it did mine!
Only nit here is the area of the red hair just above her forehead - seems to soft in comparison to the rest of the shot. Red hair - curly/wavy red hair - my fav. |
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06/24/2008 06:37:02 PM |
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06/24/2008 04:40:33 AM |
| Fantastic composition, focus and the highlights in the hair are amazing. Lovely girls great job. |
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06/22/2008 02:12:44 PM |
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06/20/2008 05:47:00 PM |
| Cute photo! Adorable girls.. love the hair!! 9 |
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06/20/2008 03:03:47 PM |
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06/20/2008 10:39:53 AM |
| Well, there are those beautiful girls we have come to know and love! this is really nice. I like the lighting and focus, and the expressions are showing us quite a bit about their personalities. |
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06/19/2008 10:47:08 PM |
| classic. only nit pick is the perspective. |
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06/19/2008 12:45:33 PM |
So I am reading through the score thread and I think I need to be swayed by the discussion (even irrationally so). I am not quite sure if this was a setup shot so I must DNMC it and give it a 2. Odds are these girls did not even realize they were lying next to each other or that someone was standing over them taking their picture. So I would have to lean towards the fact that this is more of a caught candid rather than a planned portrait which obviously does not meet the challenge. In fact so much so that I am going to call this shot up for validation in hopes that they will change the rule about not disqualifying DNMC images. I am just totally amazed that someone would enter an image like this into a challenge of this type.
ETA - bumping up. ;) |
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06/19/2008 08:15:50 AM |
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06/18/2008 03:38:27 PM |
Is this  levyj413? It's beautiful and I hope you have it printed and hanging at home. |
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06/18/2008 01:00:06 PM |
 reminds me a lot of this jewel. nice shot, think it's a little redish on the temperature/white balance. nice job! |
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06/18/2008 09:38:24 AM |
| Scalvert? Looks like his kids. Good setup, lighting is a bit harsh/artificial looking though |
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06/18/2008 08:53:42 AM |
| Wonderful color! Love the expressions and freckles! 10 |
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06/18/2008 05:49:05 AM |
Nice photo
i think you could have played or accentuated the hair moreso
but still.. love it |
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