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Challenge: Wheels (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Sony DSC-P10
Location: Guilford, CT
Date: Apr 4, 2004
Date Uploaded: Apr 6, 2004

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Place: 133 out of 283
Avg (all users): 5.2301
Avg (commenters): 6.0000
Avg (participants): 5.1092
Avg (non-participants): 5.3500
Views since voting: 624
Votes: 239
Comments: 10
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04/20/2004 09:41:57 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

What a wonderful shot! I didn't get a chance to vote in this challenge but if I had this would have gotten an 8 from me, at least. The image does convey a great sense of retired and the wear and weathered look on the wagon and the wheel is very nicely detailed. I played with the cropping a little bit (putting paper on the screen to try different looks) and a slightly tighter crop on the right really brought the wheel out more and maybe a slightly bigger crop on the left so the one spoke on the upper left is complete? The lighting is very nice, natural but not overly bright, again lending to the feeling of relaxed and retired. A touch more contrast might help just a bit but other than that this is a great pictures!

Good Luck In Future Challenges!

Deannda
DNeufer@stny.rr.com if you have any questions or want to discuss this further!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/13/2004 06:40:10 PM
You captured the feeling of retired very well. I like your angles. Nice picture.
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04/12/2004 10:03:11 PM
great clarity and composition
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04/12/2004 04:53:53 PM
good try but the color seem very off
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04/11/2004 11:36:53 PM
I like this one. I'm glad you didn't use b&w or sepia. the red on the wagon at top is great.
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04/11/2004 02:03:28 AM
Good
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04/07/2004 11:09:42 PM
i appreciate the framing, but the subject is just too common....or obvious, i should say.
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04/07/2004 10:12:58 PM
Great subject and nice composition, but it seems overexposed and the colors seem bland. I think a little playing with the levels in PS would bring the colors out, or go the other direction and try it in B&W or sepia.
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04/07/2004 01:13:04 PM
a little blury..
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04/07/2004 11:57:52 AM
a tad more contrst, a tad more sharpening and it'd be a 10
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