Foreground seems almost painted. Not sure it creates an attractive appeal. Also there is a great deal of grain, probably due to high iso and long exposure. I think subject could have been better.
In some ways I really like it. It's kind of creepy with an ironic foreground of flowers. The flowers are over-sharpened or compressed and the flash is very harsh. I like the rest of it though. I fear it will score on the lower end of the stack but thanks for sharing something different and for staying outside the box.
Since this was "advanced editing", you could have taken advantage of that and done a few things (assuming, of course, that you have the software for it). At the very least clone out the power line. Possibly taking a second frame with the background sharp, and merge them. Increase the saturation on the foreground, or better still (as I have a feeling you may have used a camera mounted flash) done a light paint from the side. Like this, I find it difficult to see anything interesting, captivating or pretty in it, sorry.
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