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06/10/2008 03:28:52 PM |
Did you use a flash? It is a bit harsh, I think. Good composition though. |
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06/10/2008 12:32:28 PM |
Hmm - no stars, planets, or moon. Slightly over sharpened, and the composition feels odd. 2 |
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06/09/2008 07:58:03 PM |
Foreground seems almost painted. Not sure it creates an attractive appeal. Also there is a great deal of grain, probably due to high iso and long exposure. I think subject could have been better. |
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06/09/2008 01:37:46 PM |
I lke this, it is different, the only I don'r like is the electric line |
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06/07/2008 12:31:10 AM |
Too much distraction with no real subject. |
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06/06/2008 01:50:27 PM |
a little bit too much noise |
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06/06/2008 01:35:49 PM |
Wire..flowerss..Noise..where's the Night Sky.. |
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06/06/2008 03:21:27 AM |
The flash over powers the image. |
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06/05/2008 09:15:10 PM |
there isn't enough foreground to justify the out-of-focus background |
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06/05/2008 07:07:34 PM |
i like the grain in this photo. |
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06/05/2008 01:46:54 PM |
Interesting composition but a bit noisy. Good luck, anyway. |
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06/05/2008 01:43:53 PM |
Art speaks differently to different people. |
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06/05/2008 09:34:47 AM |
Good composition here, particularly the framing. |
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06/04/2008 09:59:54 PM |
It's not working for me - The front is overexposed, the back is really fuzzy. |
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06/04/2008 08:23:43 PM |
Minor emphasis on the sky. |
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06/04/2008 07:13:49 PM |
In some ways I really like it. It's kind of creepy with an ironic foreground of flowers. The flowers are over-sharpened or compressed and the flash is very harsh. I like the rest of it though. I fear it will score on the lower end of the stack but thanks for sharing something different and for staying outside the box. |
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06/04/2008 04:46:23 PM |
The main thing re the theme, the night sky, is out of focus, but the flowers in the foreground are nice. |
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06/04/2008 11:52:35 AM |
Since this was "advanced editing", you could have taken advantage of that and done a few things (assuming, of course, that you have the software for it). At the very least clone out the power line. Possibly taking a second frame with the background sharp, and merge them. Increase the saturation on the foreground, or better still (as I have a feeling you may have used a camera mounted flash) done a light paint from the side. Like this, I find it difficult to see anything interesting, captivating or pretty in it, sorry. |
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06/04/2008 07:17:47 AM |
Use the moon, stars or planets DNMC |
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06/04/2008 01:15:02 AM |
The noise hurts the image overall. But I like the framing. |
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06/04/2008 12:48:22 AM |
Don't think having the focus on the foreground flowers was a good idea |
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06/04/2008 12:16:49 AM |
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