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Challenge: Wheels (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Sony DSC-F717
Location: Oklahoma city, OK
Date: Apr 5, 2004
Aperture: 4.5
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1000
Galleries: Sky, Urban
Date Uploaded: Apr 5, 2004

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Statistics
Place: 163 out of 283
Avg (all users): 5.0496
Avg (commenters): 5.8000
Avg (participants): 4.7788
Avg (non-participants): 5.2868
Views since voting: 722
Votes: 242
Comments: 12
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04/20/2004 12:17:37 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club:

Impressions: I like the concept, and the shot of the tires with great DOF works well. I particularly like that we get a closeup of a tire in the foreground which looks like it has pretty uneven tire wear.

Improvements: Looks like your camera failed you a bit, as there appears to be purple fringing around the trees. The sky itself seems a bit odd in color as well. Compositionally, it might have been better to use a vertical division into thirds, e.g., two thirds tires, one third sky (or vice versa, but since the tires are the subject, I think two-thirds tires.

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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/13/2004 11:04:28 AM
i like this one a lot, but i would like it more if there werent trees and clouds
04/12/2004 10:12:00 PM
aw thats a nice pic the sky is so pretty
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04/12/2004 07:38:53 AM
Those are tyres, are'nt they?
04/11/2004 02:25:35 AM
Hi, sky is performing well, interesting subject too. But for me the horizon is too much in the middle, violation of the rule of thirds. Otherwise nice picture.
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04/10/2004 12:44:16 PM
Too dark on the wheels, the effect is almost lost on two flat zones: Up shine, down dark..
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04/09/2004 06:29:49 AM
beautiful contrast
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04/08/2004 01:30:36 PM
Maybe lost a little detail in the front, a little grainy? nice sky though!
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04/07/2004 06:59:45 PM
I would have liked to see more definition of the tires. Nice use of the sky as a backdrop.
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04/07/2004 03:07:07 PM
pretty sky, but the subject matter, the tires, are badly under exposed and too dark. i am looking at a black hole here, and that is not interesting to me
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04/07/2004 12:00:54 PM
Good effort on a tricky exposure between the bright sky and dark tires, showing detail in the treads. THe composition doesn't tickle my fancy
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04/07/2004 01:42:10 AM
Ominous
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