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05/20/2008 12:39:41 PM |
Very nice shot Steve.
The only v.small details that I would correct are the light patch under her left hand strap as it heads up to her shoulder (I think the strap is actually just twisted and showing the lighter material, but it would be easy to lose), and maybe smooth out the creases on her pants by her thigh.
Apart from those two very small items it looks really good - heck even with those two it still looks good :- ) |
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05/20/2008 09:14:31 AM |
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05/20/2008 08:37:10 AM |
| Sometimes the models do make the shot ;) This is really good, can't add much to what's been said except you should always make sure to position a model that's showing her stomach to hide that very very slight tummy bulge. You'll notice you can only see it on one side (and you might want to use pp to get rid of it before she sees it). |
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05/20/2008 12:50:35 AM |
| Cheeky - Yes! I think the white background may be a bit stark. |
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05/19/2008 06:32:26 PM |
naomi is excellent .. so cheeky and GOOD LOOKIN'.!! ..
great shot .. love your composition .. :) |
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05/19/2008 01:04:49 PM |
Good expression and teasing setup. Very nice overall.
Constructive crit: BG has a yellow cast on the right side (intentional?). Also, though it's not seen, having her point her toes on the left foot and perhaps put the foot a bit more forward would have shaped her leg a bit better. You might dodge the shadow on her left cheek a bit, and the one cast on her forearm by the suit strap.
(BTW - in answer to your question about my using the 18-200 for macros, it's done by using extension tubes, which sit between the lens and camera.)
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