The lighting is a bit harsh, imo, and the tones are a little off. I'd second Kelly's suggestion to whiten up her eyes. I am not too hot about the wrinkles in the background but I absolutely love her playful pose.
I like this one a lot! Her expression is great. My only minor nits would be the bright spot on her bicep - could use less lighting there - and the background could be darker. Keep in mind - those are REALLY minor nitpicks - I'm happy with it the way it is as well!
i like this one better then day 10, but the only nit-pick i can find about this is that the hair in front of her eye is kinda annoying. Other then that, its a great expression! Great work
Great capture of expression! It reminds me of "bring it on" look that some my female cyclist friends have before a bike ride. Depth of field is great too. The eyes are spot on in focus and arm has a nice soft look. The depth of field pulls your eyes directly to her expression. Great shot.
Cheers,
JKH
quirky . !!
i prefer day 10 naomi .. just a personal preference coz they're both excellent .. altho when i look at this again it grows on me .. i think they're neck a neck now .. !!
this one has a more 'personal' touch .. mainly coz she's looking right at me .. combined with the expression it really is a winner .. :)
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