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05/18/2008 12:44:54 PM |
| To me, her head seems so small compared to the open space around her. I wonder how this would have looked if cropped to be a vertical image? Your title is interesting...but to me violet is purple and not blue. I do like the blue and the highlights on the hair though. |
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05/16/2008 09:02:30 PM |
| Interesting title and tones. |
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05/15/2008 11:15:59 PM |
| There is a lot of depth in the expression of the model. I can't exactly put my finger on it, which kind of works as it leaves a bit of mystery into what she was thinking. As far as lighting and composition, I personally think you missed the mark. If I were taking this, I would have avoided the shadow across the face and the white area on the left. Also, I would have placed the model off center and up further to include more of the shoulders. |
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05/15/2008 11:07:06 AM |
| the background really frames the woman well - the colors, the rectangles of light and dark - really good stuff |
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05/13/2008 10:22:25 PM |
Composition: 3 - A better crop might have helped here.
Technical: 5
Creativity: 4
Appeal: 5
Challenge: 5
Overall Score: 5 - (weighted - NOT a calculated average) |
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05/13/2008 02:46:36 PM |
| I'd possibly suggest framing this a bit lower - less space at the top and more of her :-) |
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05/12/2008 10:39:07 PM |
| Nice idea. Vertical lines kind of distract a bit. Your model looks like she got tired of posing for you (or is mad about the UV Wig). |
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05/12/2008 10:27:05 AM |
| Ultraviolet is one word and the wig is not really violet either. Sadly, DNMC |
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05/12/2008 07:22:40 AM |
| Nice colours. Pity about the white background on the left. Takes the focus away from her face. |
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05/12/2008 01:42:27 AM |
| I like your original image, but it's a little bit flat and the white is distracting. I wish I could see more detail and brighter lighting on her cool hair. |
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