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05/12/2008 12:14:52 PM |
Her eyes engage me and distract me from her disappearing bust. Far be it for me to C&C work of an obvious pro, but I would clone out the straps and crop the image up from the bottom. The straps cheapen the image, IMO. She is a woman who should be wearing nothing but lipstick... Nice work. |
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05/12/2008 11:40:39 AM |
This is really good. I wish the color of her face was the same as her body. I love how her eyes really stand out. |
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05/11/2008 07:51:39 PM |
You're really improving. I love the catch light and the sharp focus on the eyes. The lighting to me looks very natural, and not too harsh |
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05/10/2008 08:12:59 PM |
I think this is fantastic! The eyes are beautifully done, in focus and sharp. I do agree that the lighting on her face is a touch harsh, giving her complexion an odd color cast. |
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05/10/2008 03:48:26 AM |
This is a really nice portrait thats for sure..... |
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05/09/2008 07:22:55 PM |
Just an excellent portrait- you are "rockin' " |
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05/09/2008 05:55:06 PM |
This is definitely one of my favorites of your shoot. Classic beauty. Flawlessly done! |
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05/09/2008 08:28:48 AM |
WOW ... your portraits are wonderful .. this is just excellent .. she looks like she has attitude .. !!..:) |
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05/09/2008 08:06:26 AM |
She has incredible eyes. Given the lighting (you know me - I think it's a touch harsh), you did well with the editing. She does look a smidge strained. Maybe a dark background would help absorb some of the brightness (I have no idea what I'm talking about LOL) Keep at it. |
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05/09/2008 08:04:06 AM |
There seems something up with the colour on her face - quite orangey. |
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05/09/2008 01:24:21 AM |
you need to tickle her, or i have heard make the model jump to relax them.
:) she's pretty.
what color lip gloss would that be? |
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05/09/2008 01:14:58 AM |
I think the photography aspects & technicals are all great - lighting, focus, etc. Not sure about her expression though - she looks like she's smiling grudgingly. Love the eyes though. |
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