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P&S Day 8: Jess VI
P&S Day 8: Jess VI
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Camera: Nikon D300
Lens: Nikon AF Nikkor 50mm f/1.8D
Date: May 4, 2008
Aperture: f/3.5
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/125
Galleries: Portraiture, Studio
Date Uploaded: May 9, 2008

Viewed: 545
Comments: 12
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From the first shoot. I'm getting the editing workflow down. C&C please - don't be shy.

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05/12/2008 12:14:52 PM
Her eyes engage me and distract me from her disappearing bust. Far be it for me to C&C work of an obvious pro, but I would clone out the straps and crop the image up from the bottom. The straps cheapen the image, IMO. She is a woman who should be wearing nothing but lipstick... Nice work.
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05/12/2008 11:40:39 AM
This is really good. I wish the color of her face was the same as her body. I love how her eyes really stand out.
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05/11/2008 07:51:39 PM
You're really improving. I love the catch light and the sharp focus on the eyes. The lighting to me looks very natural, and not too harsh
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05/10/2008 08:12:59 PM
I think this is fantastic! The eyes are beautifully done, in focus and sharp. I do agree that the lighting on her face is a touch harsh, giving her complexion an odd color cast.
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05/10/2008 03:48:26 AM
This is a really nice portrait thats for sure.....
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05/09/2008 07:22:55 PM
Just an excellent portrait- you are "rockin' "
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05/09/2008 05:55:06 PM
This is definitely one of my favorites of your shoot. Classic beauty. Flawlessly done!
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05/09/2008 08:28:48 AM
WOW ... your portraits are wonderful .. this is just excellent .. she looks like she has attitude .. !!..:)
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05/09/2008 08:06:26 AM
She has incredible eyes. Given the lighting (you know me - I think it's a touch harsh), you did well with the editing. She does look a smidge strained. Maybe a dark background would help absorb some of the brightness (I have no idea what I'm talking about LOL) Keep at it.
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05/09/2008 08:04:06 AM
There seems something up with the colour on her face - quite orangey.
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05/09/2008 01:24:21 AM
you need to tickle her, or i have heard make the model jump to relax them.
:) she's pretty.
what color lip gloss would that be?
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05/09/2008 01:14:58 AM
I think the photography aspects & technicals are all great - lighting, focus, etc. Not sure about her expression though - she looks like she's smiling grudgingly. Love the eyes though.
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